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Warren Zevon as poet

I recently sounded out a wise man of letters (and my friend) Jake Burnett about poetry as musical lyric, preoccupied as I have been in forecasting the headaches my poems would occasion a composer.

Happily he did not send me to Sidney Lanier. At Jake’s suggestion I dived into Warren Zevon’s “My Ride’s Here,” the title track of his 2002 album. I figured that before analyzing the prosody I’d better listen to recordings, my favorite of which is Bruce Springteen‘s. He uses accordion and fiddle in an acoustic-ish version that gestures toward country more than Zevon’s own synthesizer-and-electric guitar orchestration does. Zevon’s rendering felt oddly like the sort of hymn you might hear in a megachurch (Zevon would hate that), what with the fourteeners he favors (pace Emily Dickinson). Given his references to the American west, where the poem is set, Springsteen’s choice makes good sense to me.

Not that it’s a my-wife-left-me-with-six children-and-my-truck-won’t-start whinge. Think mythic mashup with a half-dozen Biblical references (e.g., Jacob and the angel), a half-dozen popular culture references (e.g., John Wayne), and a half-dozen literary references (mostly name-dropping, though Shakespeare appears only in a silent nod. ‘Tis better so.). Zevon manages to turn this olla podrida into a meditation on death. We come to realize that the refrain—”My ride’s here”—refers to the speaker’s death and possible apotheosis into the Rock & Roll Hall of Fame. He’s waiting for a chariot, after all.

So as you see I started trying to break down Zevon’s lyrics into their constituent parts. I’m not there yet, but it’s an interesting and I hope fruitful exercise for someone aspiring to write lyrics for an art-song.

From poem to lyric?

Not every poem can be easily or beautifully set to music. A few years ago I read Auden’s Christmas Oratorio with great excitement, but it’s not hard to see why Benjamin Britten reneged on his promise to write music for it: I’m pretty sure it would have been longer than The Ring Cycle!

Today I met with a composer friend to kick around my ideas for a song cycle. He had good questions and useful comments, and I’m hopeful that we can continue our discussion even before Orange County announces grant recipients in September. Several of the poems he liked had imagery about or references to music–which perhaps I should have predicted! Thinking about other song cycles I know, I’m estimating about 3 minutes per song.

I think we have a healthy passel of material on love (and its opposite), nature (a la Bryant), family, and grief. Not necessarily in that order.

Reinventing myself (again)

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Deerslayer in real life

The actress who plays Deerslayer, the talking rifle in The Whistler, happens to be Juilliard-trained cellist and composer Gerri Sutyak, who wrote and performed the score for the short film below.  Her musical talent will figure prominently in my play as well.

The film Carl & Jim, by 12-year old scriptwriter Michael Wolfe. Check out the score.

And she can whistle loodles.

You can watch a clip of Gerri as Deerslayer in my pitch video.

The Whistler goes live!



Here’s the latest and best take on The Whistler yet, as we reveal more secrets about the play and ratchet up interest in attending and contributing.  I’m proud of having edited this video on my USA Artists page, but the acting and moviemaking talent are what make it work.  By the way, donations through USA Artists are tax deductible and we have cool premiums.